Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Poetry what do you think honesty not sucking up:)?

depressing.. yes... I think its very emotional and that it is good for you to write about it, if this is the way you feel. However, the poem could use work. I don't really like the "Think" lines. It does have some good imagery. But, if this poem is for yourself, then its all good because its all about how you like it.

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